My topic today, as I prepare for Camp NaNoWriMo is how to write in active voice and avoid passive voice.
I still find myself puzzled by active vs passive voice, so these sites are as much for my reference as for yours.
I have two links for you. Both are very good at explaining the difference.
“… active (The executive committee approved the new policy) or
passive (The new policy was approved by the executive committee)”
Active: “[Thing doing action] + [verb] + [thing receiving action]”
Passive: “[Thing receiving action] + [be] + [past participle of verb] + [by] + [thing doing action]”
This is active voice: The swimmer reached the end of the pool.
This is passive voice: The end of the pool was reached by the swimmer.
If you are thinking of participating in Camp NaNoWriMo best of luck to you! I am ready to begin tomorrow, although I may start a few hours early.